# Review of ‘One Mathematical Cat, Please!’

I submitted my book, One Mathematical Cat, Please!, to Brooks/Cole Publishers. They loved it. However, it isn't a textbook for any particular course—instead, it's a supplement to any math course, from junior high on up. After many deliberations, the underlying concern that ‘supplements don't sell’ won out.

I cherish these lines from the review:

“It is wonderfully written and crafted with a care you rarely see.”

“If you can find the right place to put it, this book will do a great service to the mathematical educational world.”

Most of the items mentioned in this review that ask for changes were incorporated into the current version. So, you usually won't be able to see what the reviewer was ‘complaining’ about. I've colored some selections for your easy perusal.

## The Review

1.   Please describe the course in which you would consider using this manuscript. What is the greatest teaching problem in the course?

This manuscript is not a textbook for a course. It is supplementary material for students to help them understand mathematical language, and in particular the distinction between a mathematical thing (an expression or number) and a mathematical sentence (an assertion, often that two things are the same). I would love for my students to understand this, in lots of courses. I could imagine using this book as an optional (or maybe even required) supplement for remedial courses (Elementary Algebra, Intermediate Algebra), the ‘mathematics for elementary education majors’ course, the precalculus course, and the finite math and baby calculus course for business majors.

But if you want to single out one course in which I'd use it, it is MTH 100, a special course we offer in the summer before the freshman year to disadvantaged students who need help getting to the college level in mathematics and writing. The content of this course is basically Elementary Algebra, but I would use this book at the beginning before we got into the algebra per se. The enrollment is usually in the 50–80 range, with small sections, some taught by regular faculty and some by part-timers. The greatest teaching problem in this course is the poor mathematical background of the students and various social and intellectual dynamics that get in the way of their proper attitude toward learning. In answering the rest of the questions, I'll keep this course in mind.

2.   Do you agree with the rationale for the contents and approach of the book? Does the author succeed in his/her goal for the book?

Yes and yes. There is a real need for students to understand the ideas in this book. Some students pick it up easily as they study mathematics in high school and beyond. Others are so used to thinking of mathematics as pushing symbols around rather than communicating ideas in a special language that they never understand these ideas. This hampers their success. Thus I am convinced that the need for this book is immense. Your hardest job will be to convince unthinking unthinking faculty members that the need is there. The author does a good job of getting her points across—moving very gently and deliberately, saying things just right for the most part.

3.   Which topics to you think should be added? Deleted?

I might add some more examples of story problems, but I don't think I'd add any more topics. (Well, maybe a discussion of the order of operations, picking up on the problems raised on pages 44–46.) I might also like to see more of a discussion of typical errors that students make (like writing $\,2+3 = 5\cdot 2 = 10\,$), integrated throughout the book. In Section 10 I would add the word ‘function’ to the general discussion, rather than just as a sidebar on page 144 (even elementary school students are told about ‘function machines’). On page 112, I would stress this distinction between declarative and imperative modes more. I looked at the web site mentioned there and see that the present manuscript is part of a wider conspiracy!

A few things don't seem to work as well as the rest, and I would consider dropping these (they are marked in the manuscript—specifically the material on page 19 and some or all of the last section).

4.   Is the level of detail in the explanations of the manuscript appropriate for your students? Are the tone and style of the manuscript suitable for your students? Should any changes be made? Are the organization and level of problems suitable for your students?

Except where I've marked it, the level of detail, tone, style, organization, and level of problems seem about right for my students. It's not clear that the reading level isn't too high for some of the intended audience, however. (I'm not an expert in education, but it seemed to me that seventh grade students might not have the intellectual sophistication or the reading skills needed to appreciate the discussion in some places.) Various suggested changes are marked throughout the manuscript.

One stylistic point I'm not too enthusiastic about is the constant talk about what ‘mathematicians’ do. The author should think carefully about the down side of this approach—a student says to himself, ‘I'm not going to be a mathematician, so this is irrelevant to my learning mathematics.’ I'm not sure how to change this approach, though—it pervades the entire book. On a related note, look at the use of ‘result’ on page 77; we mathematicians forget sometimes that this is not common English usage. (On the same page is another item I'd want to change—the lie that ‘theorem’ means ‘true statement’ rather than ‘proved statement’. It's a subtle point, not likely to matter to this audience, but we should try to avoid telling white lies when possible, even at this level.)

I would not be quite so forgiving about using calculators for trivial arithmetic as this author is (e.g., averaging 0.1 and 0.2 on page 18), but that's a minor point and she has good reason for doing it her way (one being that she doesn't want the anxiety of doing the calculations to get in the way).

Since this is not a textbook, you can't really view the ‘problems’ in the normal way—students are expected to do them all, and they're an integral part of the presentation, not a separate section of drill and practice. They are excellent.

In the later sections, more motivation would be useful (e.g., pages 149 and 151).

5.   How well does this book stand up to its competitors?

That's easy to answer: There are no competitors. It is not a textbook for a course but a supplement, and I've never seen any similar thing before. One marketing idea you might think about is stressing the NCTM Standards and their emphasis on proper mathematical communication.

6.   If you were the sole decision-maker, would you adopt this book for your course? Why?

Yes, I would require it as a supplement for MTH 100 (in addition to an elementary algebra text), and cover it first, returning to it as needed throughout the course. The reason is that I want these students to get the point this little book sets out to make: that they need to communicate mathematics correctly by understanding the rationale and structure of its language.